Old 13-09-2007, 12:08   #41 (permalink)
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No it's not nasty, or Argos jewellery based...

It's just that, well, I just don't like the business card. Sorry Sara
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Old 13-09-2007, 12:10   #42 (permalink)
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No it's not nasty, or Argos jewellery based...

It's just that, well, I just don't like the business card. Sorry Sara

No its fine, just tell me what you don't like, It the only way I learn, I don't have a degree in design or anything similar, infact I'm doing a computing solutions degree so any advice is always appreciated.... x
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Old 13-09-2007, 12:16   #43 (permalink)
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Oh right sorry - thought you were a designer.

I don't like the big 'ob' on the back. I don't like the head on the 'character'. Not really my cup of tea overall, but if you're not a designer it's not a bad attempt. If the chap likes it, and it's obviously been considered and everything, then it's all good. Nice red.
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Old 13-09-2007, 12:16   #44 (permalink)
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wouldn't say a degree helps too much mind, check out the degree vs talent thread.

oh and don't mind coops - he doesn't like anything.

http://www.designerstalk.com/forums/...vs-degree.html
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Old 13-09-2007, 12:18   #45 (permalink)
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Oh right sorry - thought you were a designer.

I don't like the big 'ob' on the back. I don't like the head on the 'character'. Not really my cup of tea overall, but if you're not a designer it's not a bad attempt. If the chap likes it, and it's obviously been considered and everything, then it's all good. Nice red.

Well I am employed as design and developer at the moment but developer/programmers my stream just had ot get my foot in the door
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Old 13-09-2007, 12:21   #46 (permalink)
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wouldn't say a degree helps too much mind, check out the degree vs talent thread.

oh and don't mind coops - he doesn't like anything.

http://www.designerstalk.com/forums/...vs-degree.html


Thank you for that its quite interesting, I once worked for a branding agency as an artworker and the CD told me he would never employ a designer that didn't have a degree.
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Old 13-09-2007, 12:25   #47 (permalink)
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wouldn't say a degree helps too much mind, check out the degree vs talent thread.

oh and don't mind coops - he doesn't like anything.

http://www.designerstalk.com/forums/...vs-degree.html

Yeah he's right - everything's just so rubbish.

I don't have a degree either, but I have a design consultancy.
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Old 13-09-2007, 12:27   #48 (permalink)
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haha - gis a job
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Old 13-09-2007, 12:28   #49 (permalink)
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Really better to have talent & a degree
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Old 13-09-2007, 12:29   #50 (permalink)
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Really better to have talent & a degree


Indeed x
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Old 13-09-2007, 12:31   #51 (permalink)
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haha - gis a job

When can you start?
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Old 13-09-2007, 12:32   #52 (permalink)
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Old 13-09-2007, 13:57   #53 (permalink)
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Yeah he's right - everything's just so rubbish.

I don't have a degree either, but I have a design consultancy.


oooo check you, nice one!!! So wheres that at? x
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Old 13-09-2007, 16:22   #54 (permalink)
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Really better to have talent & a degree

good job you've got a degree then!
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Old 13-09-2007, 17:14   #55 (permalink)
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Old 13-09-2007, 17:32   #56 (permalink)
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I really like it you obviously put some good thought into this design and I think it holds up really well and achieves what it set out to achieve with out extra crap. Degrees mean nothing you are who you are.
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Old 13-09-2007, 18:16   #57 (permalink)
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I really like it you obviously put some good thought into this design and I think it holds up really well and achieves what it set out to achieve with out extra crap. Degrees mean nothing you are who you are.


Awwww thank you and yes I did, obviously its not to everyones taste, but then thats impossible to do x
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Old 13-09-2007, 19:02   #58 (permalink)
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Old 14-09-2007, 03:18   #59 (permalink)
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Blonde girl posts design. Thread goes to 3 pages in a few hours.

You guys are nothing if not predictable.

I like the little 'R' guy on the card, but the 'o' and the 'b' execution not so much. The idea is nice, but I feel like they don't quite belong together. The only other thing that I'm slightly down on is that when you look at it (perhaps more so as a designer) you can sorta see a bunch of shapes you made to create the logo. I always think that something really effective diverts your mind away from how it was done. But that's maybe a little harsh - it's a good job, especially for someone self-taught. I'm pretty sure the client would be pleased.

So, which one are you Sara -the one on the left or the one on the right?
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Old 14-09-2007, 03:35   #60 (permalink)
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Hiya, thanks for the comments Its always nice to have good indepth feed back with an explanation. So thank you very much.

I'm the one of the left adn the person on the right is my best friend, we were on our way to Cornwall and a 5 hour journey took 10 1/2 but it was so funny so not all too bad hehe hope all is well your side x
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